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Ryoga Fein

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PostSubject: Ryoga Fein   Ryoga Fein Icon_minitimeFri Oct 14, 2011 11:12 am

~Getting To Know You~




Name: Ryoga Fein

Clan: N/A

Gender: Male


Sexuality: Straight


Age: 22

Height: 5' 11"

Body Type: Ryoga

Appearance: Ryoga has an intimidating presence, which is totally contradicting to his character. His hight is average yet when people see him he appears to be much taller. His muscles are well defined underneath his clothing giving him an appearance not unlike that of a body builder when he is nude. His face bares a few scars from his intense training that he has done since childhood. He has one prominant scar that starts at the corner of his left eye and arcs down to his jaw bone.

Ryoga's hair sits flat on his head with a few pieces lifting up. His hair is the color of snow from a birth defect that has to do with his melanin. His eyes are also pure white, except for the pupil. This has given him a scary looking face along with his scar.

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Village: Ryoga lives in the village of Iwagakure


Rank: Trying for Tsuchikage

Profession: Ryoga is a top notch medical ninja.

Personality: Ryoga is a loud guy. You'll know when he is within a few miles of him just because of his voice. Although he is loud he is still intelligent. What he says is what he believes and what he knows. Ryoga doesn't allow for betrayal, his subordinates must be loyal and trustworthy. Though Ryoga is hard on is comrades he is a nice guy. He loves to laugh and have fun when he isn't working. Ryoga isn't a fan of battle especially after the war with the Leaf. That's why he specialized in learning healing jutsus.



/Now We're Talking\




Fighting Style: When Ryoga is forced to fight he uses his fists. His fighting style is that of a calculated strategist.

Carried Weapons and Items: Ryoga carries a set of steel knuckles. a few kunai, shuriken, and healing scrolls. Also his summoning scroll.

Dominant Weapon: In a fight Ryoga's dominant weapon is his steel knuckles.


Element: Doton - earth

Shall we discuss your abilities?


Jutsu Type: ninjutsu


Ninjutsu:

Name: Iyashi no Te
Description: Iyashi no Te requires that the user surrounds his hands in his chakra and transfers it to the person he is healing. The chakra enters the persons wound repairing it quickly. The jutsu's effectiveness is based on how much chakra the user puts into it.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu Grade: B

Name: Mukankaku
Description: Mukankaku is a jutsu that takes away all feeling from a target. The user coats his/he hand with chakra, touches the target's head, and send the chakra in to stab the part of the brain responsible for feeling. Though the target can still move everything, he will feel no pain, nor anything else.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu Grade:

Name: Chakra no Fukikesu
Description: The user hits the target's chakra center causing it to shut down erasing all chakra within the target's body. But this jutus is a double edged sword, in that it erases the chakra within the user as well.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu Grade:

Name: Choujin no Badi
Description: The user covers their hands in chakra and places it on the target's body. But instead of healing the chakra going into the person destroys cells causing a slow decay. The decay spreads like a rash starting from the spot that the jutsu was administered.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu Grade:


Name: Chakra no Akinai
Description: The user touches a target causing the physical health of the target to be transferred to the user, or vice versa. How much health transferred is equal to the amount of time the target and user are within contact of eachother.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu Grade:

Name: Mesu no Chakra
Description: The user gathers shakra to their hand and shapes it like a blade around the fingers. This chakra blade does not cut the skin, but it can cut vital organs, muscles, and even bone. So the target won't percieve an actual attack until they realize the internal damage.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu Grade:

Name: Chakra Pulse
Description: The user gathers chakra around their hands and sends a pulse of chakra through the patient's body. The chakra moves through the body and comes back to the user's hands telling the user what is wrong within the patient's body.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu Grade: C


Name: Body Detoxification
Description: The user submits a special chakra that destroys most poisons and venoms. The stronger the user and the more knowledgable about poisons, venoms they are, the more they can get rid of.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu Grade: B

Name: Rock Bullet
Description: Using rocks and or pebbles the user shoots them from his hand using their control over the doton element. The rocks travel at the speed of a bullet and can pierce humans.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu Grade: C



Taijutsu:

Name: Medic's Barrage
Description: As one who knows about the body the user punches the nose, kicks this side of the knee, and attacking the back of the neck. The hit to the nose causes the eyes to water and vision to blur. The hit to the side of the knee breaks the knee causing the person to fall to the ground. Finally the hit to the neck breaks it causing death. If death is not wanted the blow can be to the back of the head knocking the person unconcious.
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Jutsu Grade: A


Genjutsu:


Life can be cold without partners...


Summon Name: Choucho Summon
Summon Type: Butterfly
Description: Summon Link
Summon Link https://narutots.forumotion.com/t40-choucho-summon

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Relations: Ryoga doesn't have many close relations. His mother passed away when he was 3 after having a child, Ryoga's brother. Ryoga's father raised both Ryoga and his brother Shin. Ryoga's relationship with his father was estranged while he was extremely close to his brother Shin. Shin is Ryoga's best friend although they don't have to much time to see eachother, because Shin is a diplomat of Igawakure.


History:
When Ryoga was born his parent's knew he would be great. Although the doctor noticed immediately that there was something wrong. Ryoga's eyes were pure white except for his pupil. The doctor wasn't sure what happened to Ryoga's iris and figured it wouldn't impair on anything. When the doctor handed the baby who was yet unnamed to his mother, she looked down at him and said, "Your name will be Ryoga, Ryoga Fein."

After a few hours of medical surveillance on Ryoga the doctor deemed him healthy and ready to take home. Ryoga was snatched up by his eager mother and taken home for the first time. Ryoga wore the curiosity that every baby had when they see everything for the very first time. Though he was curious, his parents noticed he looked at everything in an almost calculating way. The look in his eyes showed an intelligence blooming.

When Ryoga was three months old and started growing hair his parents noticed that his hair was snow white. They figured the problem with his hair was the same as with his eyes, so they payed no attention. Soon Ryoga had a head full of shiny white hair that could blind a man. Though his parents didn't pay too much attention to Ryoga's hair they knew other people would, so they started dyeing his hair black as soon as it was growing. Even though Ryoga was so young his parents knew it would be trouble for him in the future.

Three years after Ryoga was born he was blessed with a little brother. But his little brother didn't come without a cost. Though Ryoga had a new brother, his mother died during the birth. The doctors weren't sure what went wrong, but they thought that she just wasn't able to hold on. Though Ryoga's mother was alive long enough to name his brother Shin. Even though Ryoga lost a mother, he gained a brother that he would take care of as best he could. Ryoga's father was amazed at the protectiveness he showed towards his brother. As soon as they all got home Ryoga's father started to show signs of depression.

Over the years Ryoga learned to take care of his little brother, because of his father's absence due to his increasing depression. He learned to feed him, change him, and altogether care for him. But Ryoga held no ill will against his father, and he had only love for his younger brother. Even when Ryoga started at the academy he took the time to find a babysitter for Shin. Ryoga found a babysitter relatively easily and began his life as an academy student.

Almost immediately after joining the academy he was pegged as an exceptional student. He studied well, learned jutsu almost immediately, played well with kids, and was incredibly smart. In no time Ryoga passed his academy exams and became a genin. Ryoga participated in the chunin exams a year later and passed in record time. After studying medical ninjutsu, and creating a few of his own he joined the few other people in the rank of Jounin at the age of 19.

After three years of being a medical ninja on a jounin squad Ryoga thought he had seen it all. That was until he received what would become the most dangerous mission he would get. Ryoga was with his squad one night when a strange man infiltrated the city. No one knew who he was or how he managed to get in to the city, but everyone knew something wasn't right about him. The man called out the Tsuchikage to fight, or he would attack the city. Of course the Tsuchikage couldn't find anyway around this so he met the man in a field in the center of the city. All the jounin were positioned to take this man on if they got the signal so Ryoga was also at the field.

The jounin waited impatiently for the man to say something, but all he did was stand there. It felt like hours passed before he did anything. The man closed his eyes after staring at the Tsuchikage as if he was done examining him. When the man opened his eyes there was nothing but blood lust in them. In half a second the man was one the Tsuchikage, kunai in hand, but the Tsuchikage didn't receive his title for not reason. He blocked the mans kunai and started fighting back.

Everyone watched the fight with great anxiety, it wasn't usual for the Tsuchikage to fight one on one with someone. The fight was spectacular, the two caught in a dance of death. But unfortunately the fight ended after five minutes, with the strange man standing over the Tsuchikage's body. As soon as the Tsuchikage fell Ryoga jumped in. He pushed the man out of the way and started to try healing the Tsuchikage. But it was too late, even Ryoga's superb medical jutsu skills were no match for the damage done to the Tsuchikage. When Ryoga stopped trying to heal the Tsuchikage he finally took notice of his surroundings.

Ryoga took in a sharp breath as he saw the bodies of his jounin friends strewn about. And worse than that were the bodies of civilians that looked like they passed out wherever they were. Ryoga stood next to the deceased Tsuchikage and searched the village for the man's chakra, and luckily he found it. As quickly as he could Ryoga ran towards the chakra. He arrived at the man's location within a minute. When he arrived he found the man and confronted him. "Who the hell are you? Why are you doing this?" Ryoga yelled at the man desperately.

The man laughed and stared Ryoga directly in the eyes, "I'm here to test your little town, and I have to say you failed." At that Ryoga had it. He was going to protect the city with his life no matter what. Ryoga studied the situation looking for advantages he could work with. Then he found it. With a quick punch Ryoga sent rocks flying towards the man. Ryoga jumped towards the man using the rocks as leaping platforms. Ryoga took out his knuckles mid jump and punched at the man. Of course the man dodged, but Ryoga wasn't over. He punched at the man catching him in the nose, then he kicked the side of the man's right knee breaking it causing the man to fall to one knee, and finally Ryoga used all of his strength to punch the back of the man's neck.

But the man was quite powerful. He reached behind himself and caught Ryoga's punch. "That was a nice little string of moves, good try." mocked the man. Ryoga used the chance to punch the mans elbow down causing a loud cracking noise to emit from it. The man laughed again almost like he was glad Ryoga was kicking the shit out of him. But Ryoga didn't let it phase him, he made five shadow clones and had them hold the man. The man let himself be captured by the Ryoga clones, and just kept laughing. Ryoga couldn't figure out why the man was laughing so much, but he didn't have time to ask.

Ryoga gathered chakra to his right fist and pulled it back. He released his fist striking at the man's heart, but in an instant the man removed the clones, dodged the attack, and stabbed Ryoga in the stomach with a kunai. Ryoga's eyes grew wide as he felt the blade slowly enter his stomach, he could feel every millimeter of metal cut through his flesh. As the blade entered Ryoga's stomach he took the chance to use his close distance to punch them man with both fists on each side of his head. Ryoga watched as the man's head shook causing the brain to bounce around hitting the inside of the skull. Then Ryoga gathered chakra to his hand again and placed it on the mans heart. He manipulated the chakra sending it into the man's body, and cutting his aorta.

In a matter of seconds the man was on the ground spitting up blood. In 20 seconds the man was dead. Ryoga sighed with relief that the man was dead, and then proceeded to bandage his wound. After bandaging his wound he spent the rest of the day healing all who were attacked by the man and could be saved. By the end of the day he had healed over 300 people. When the day was over, Ryoga went home and slept for five days. When he awoke, the council had asked for him. Ryoga dressed himself and headed to the administration building.

When he arrived he was congratulated by the council on saving the town, and healing its citizens. Ryoga didn't accept thanks for this as it was just part of his duty as a jounin. But the council thought more than that. They believed that since the Tsuchikage passed away, the new one should be someone who would rush into battle to save their country, and one who cared about the welfare of the citizens of that country above his own. So they nominated Ryoga to be the new Tsuchikage. Which he accepted most graciously. And Ryoga began his life as the Tsuchikage.

Other Information: (Anything you'd like to share about your character that before we evaluate him/her?)

RP Sample:

Ryoga pulled out a kunai from his holder on his right leg. He held the kunai, ready for a fight. The sky darkened as the sun set behind the canyon walls. The wind pushed and pulled him as it swept through the canyon. He tried listening for any signs of movement, but the strong wind carried any possible noise away. Ryoga crouched behind a boulder that lay on the ground beside the canyon wall. He sat by the boulder for a few minutes, waiting for the wind to quiet down. Ryoga studied the landscape with a scrutinizing gaze. His eyes flowed around the canyon looking for any single clue as to who, or what was in the canyon. He wasn't used to recon, but he figured he might as well try at it. As the wind slowed down Ryoga heightened his senses ready for the smallest noise or movement.

At the hint of a noise Ryoga once again readied his weapon. He peered around the boulder to see a small light in the distance. Ryoga took mental notes of the entire scene making sure to not miss a thing. The sun was completely set, the wind was blowing slightly, the canyon walls were 25 ft. high on each side, there was a distance of 78 feet between himself and the light, and the person holding the light was male. Ryoga double checked his memory that the person holding the light was his target. The light was moving away from him at a steady pace. As the man moved further away Ryoga started moving. He made sure his feet were silent as he tailed the man.

As he grew closer he could hear the man mumbling to himself. Ryoga slowed his pace a little and strained his ears. "Almost there, I'm almost at the drop point," the man mumbled to himself. Ryoga grinned, this is what he had been waiting for, a key piece of information. Ryoga was still tailing him when a snap emanated from beneath his foot. Ryoga stopped in his tracks as the man spun around staring right at him. The man walked up to Ryoga and looked him straight in the eyes. "You fail good sir, you're just not good at this kind of stuff."

Ryoga dropped his head and grinned, "Well, I can't help that. I guess I should just stick to the healing Torin Sensei." Ryoga lifted his head and let loose a large smile while scratching his head. Torin smacked Ryoga over the head and wrapped his other arm around Ryoga's shoulders.

"At least try next time Ryoga," Torin jeered.


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PostSubject: Re: Ryoga Fein   Ryoga Fein Icon_minitimeFri Oct 14, 2011 9:19 pm

You gave a wonderful RP Sample, unfortunately you didn't do the other part I asked. Expand your history to explain an amazing reason for him to have been able to become kage early, or raise his age to 25. Do these and we'll rediscuss.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryoga Fein   Ryoga Fein Icon_minitimeSat Oct 15, 2011 9:39 am

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PostSubject: Re: Ryoga Fein   Ryoga Fein Icon_minitimeSat Oct 15, 2011 10:19 am

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Tsuchikage!

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