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PostSubject: Kosetsu Uzumaki   Kosetsu Uzumaki Icon_minitimeWed Nov 02, 2011 11:24 pm

~Getting To Know You~




Name: Kōsetsu "Kami no me wan" Uzumaki (the one with the eyes of God)


Clan: Uzumaki/Senju


Gender: Male (Male? Female? Other?)


Sexuality: Straight/Heterosexual


Age: 14 (How old is your character?)


Height: 5'8" (How tall is your character?)


Body Type: Slim but muscular (Stocky, slim, muscular, lean, buff, etc)


Appearance: His appearance is very similar to Nagato(who I assume doesnt exists in this RPG) before his use of the demon statue except his skin is slightly darker. (What does your character look like and what does he/she wear? We like pictures too,
those are nice.)


Village: Konoha


Rank: Jounin/Jounin Commander


Profession: Special fighting(this is fighting at high levels or with unusual methods of combat), Frontline Fighting.


Personality: He is a kind, and incredibly intelligent young ninja. He is very calm, reasonable, and doesnt rush into combat. He is very good at leading as shown as he is already head of his clan at such a young age. He is a genius at ninjutsu, and is quite good at taijutsu and genjutsu, but these arent close to his level of ninjutsu. He likes to make jokes when things look less serious, he is warmhearted, but not foolish or gullible.


/Now We're Talking\




Fighting Style: He is mainly reliant on both his physical speed as well as ninjutsu skills. But he can fall back onto his genjutsu and physical endurance. He is also a weapons user

Carried Weapons and Items: Summoning scroll-demon statue


Dominant Weapon: Totsuka No Tsurugi "Ten hands long sword"


Element: Wind, Water, Fire, Earth, Lightning, Yin-Yang.

Shall we discuss your abilities?


Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu?

Ninjutsu: (for Simplicity, lets say nagatos list from Narutopedia. I dont want to try and write a whole list... Sad )


Taijutsu: Great Kenjutsu, Iai.


Genjutsu: Demonic Illusions - Allows user to torture opponents in their fears by making eye contact in what seems like an alternate world with red skies and black clouds.


Life can be cold without partners...


Summon Name: Gedo Mezou Statue
Summon Type: Supplimentary, Offensive-Kinjutsu
Description: A large demonic looking statue capable of large scale destruction but it costs too much chakra for most people to summon
Summon Link

...Let's Take it Down a Notch...




Relations: His parents are two elders, his father for the clan itself. His mother for Konoha. He has 7 brothers and sisters, of which he is the oldest. He has no enemies yet, as they have been killed when they fight. But he has many friends amoung the clan.


History: He was born as the first son of the head of the Uzumaki clan branch of Konoha, he had the signature red hair like his father. His mother was a Senju clanswomen who married his father, she wasnt of very noble blood in the Senju clan and was just a remnant of the clan that survived in Konoha. She married the head of the Uzumaki clan, who was the purest of the Uzumaki bloodline left alive. This made Kosetsu of very pure blood as well. When he was 6 he entered the ninja academy at first he failed at ninjutsu and was only good at some taijutsu and genjutsu. But he trained hard and eventually learned wind and water style jutsu becoming head in his class, his dad started referring to him as a "late bloomer" for the Uzumaki clan jokingly, which slightly annoyed Kosetsu. Kosetsu continued to strive in his newfound ninjutsu powers then at 8 graduated early from the academy. As a genin he started out doing very simple missions but as the higher ups in Konoha saw his potential and his team soon became the 4th best 3 manned genin team. About half a year later at 9 his team was put into the Chuunin exams, this is where his Rinnegan was awakened in order to protect his two teammates. He used a powerful Wind-Style Jutsu he had only seen his Jounin Sensai use. Using his newfound power to his advantage; he fought his way through the chuunin exams and used his superior tactics to beat his enemies. He was one of the only 5 people who were promoted in Konoha. While a Chuunin he was put on a Six man team as first chuunin. The team had the top four Chuunin promotees, and two experianced jounin. This allowed him to go on many missions showing him the real fields of combat, gaining experiance in numerous situations. He trained his Dojutsu extensively for two years until when he was 14 tried out to become a jounin. With a complete Rinnegan and 5 years of the team under his belt he had become ready to fight in the jounin exams. He passed the tests with flying colors using his intellect, ninjutsu skills, and teamwork/combat expertiece. After his Jounin promotion he was given his own Six man team, after a few months of being a Jounin he was promoted once more to Konoha's Jounin commander for his incredible Tactical expertise and strength as a ninja. This was also because Konoha knew if a war was to errupt he was always able to be on the know to get Uzumaki clansmen to help seal loose bijuu during war. This would be able to increase konohas power if war to break out. After His final promotion he was given the title of Uzumaki Clan Head of Konoha.


Other Information: (Anything you'd like to share about your character that before we evaluate him/her?)

RP Sample: (This is from another RP, so its about as sampled as it gets)


Kurou walked into the training grounds and activated his mangekyou sharingan. He was attempting to learn the great technique called tsukyomi. This was the great genjutsu so powerful and undefeatable it was nicknamed "The Ultimate Genjutsu" He thought with this in his arsenal of techniques would greatly increase his power and notoriety as a ninja. Kurou thought he was a good ninja already and that he had done well in his career as a ninja so far. But in order to become an excellent ninja as he desired he would need at least two of the three great jutsu from the mangekyou sharingan.

The first he wanted was tsukyomi, for he had always had a fascination with genjutsu. The genjutsu made the enemy go into an opposite colored world of red and black mainly. In this world a skilled user would be able to speed up time in the opposite world making the jutsu relatively fast. A few moments in real world time. In this opposite world of genjutsu the user could inflict many torturous acts such as putting an enemy up on a wooden cross and stabbing them with a sword multiple times making them feel the pain, then making it seem as if the stabbings never happened but still lingering the pain in them. They could also make them relieve things or implant images in their mind. Such as family members dying, friends are killed, or even a whole village of people being slaughtered. You also gain the ability to tamper memories with genjutsu, making someone remember something differently then what actually happened, although this required someone to start the genjutsu before the event actually happens changing the targets perception of what happened after it happens.

After kurou gained tsukyomi he was going to learn either amaterasu or susanoo. On one hand he had a defense so great it was more perfect than the shakkaku's ultimate dense sand shield, and was labeled the ultimate defensive ninjutsu. While on the other hand he had the inextinguishable flames that would continue to burn until at least one of the targets was completely incinerated into nothingness, this gaining it the nickname as the ultimate offensive ninjutsu. Kurou stepped into the training arena; he was given a prisoner to practice tsukyomi on. He looked in the prisoners eyes and entered the opposite world. The prisoner was chained to the ground with his eyes forced to stay open the whole time so he couldn’t avoid this genjutsu. In the genjutsu the man was standing in the world then he was stabbed in the back by a kunai. He looked at him wondering why he wasn’t on the cross as he had intended. He exited the genjutsu looking at the man scared by what had just happened. Kurou then rethought the genjutsu and focused for this time. He looked into the man’s eyes again and re-entered the genjutsu. This time he was on the cross as he intended, he then proceeded to torture the man for hours on end, stabbing him over and over again with kunai, doing it multiple times in a row. Making him feel like it was there but he couldn’t see it. He had mastered the first part of the tsukyomi technique, even though he could not yet change the speed up time inside the genjutsu technique. But he would do that at the end of his training. He then got to the next part, this would be him having to implant and alter the memories of a person. He got a new subject who had amnesia; he was a high ranking Jonin in the village and needed to remember all of his techniques and memories to continue to help the village for a special mission that the mizukage gave him before he lost his memories.
They had given as much information to kurou about the ninja’s life including personal information and ninja life, even a whole psychological profile of the ninja. Kurou then entered his mind with the genjutsu, he began thinking of all the memories and tried implanting them he placed them in the correct spots in his mind and in the right order. He had completely added in his whole life. He then exited and asked him questions about himself. After the ninja failed to answer questions and stated that things in his head were fuzzy and that he could only remember a few things about himself. So he re-entered his mind and tried to replace things making them stronger memories allowing him to access them as a normal person would. He then asked him about his life and such again, to which he happily remembered. He thanked kurou and left to the mizukage to go report for his special mission. Kurou had finished the job but failed to do things in a split second, which he would also work on when he got to the end of his training.
now was going to move on to the memory altering section of this part of the training. He brought in a new prisoner who was known to remember things differently then they actually happened because of a case of early in life Alzheimer’s so kurou was supposed to use his tsukyomi training to put the man’s memories and mind back into shape by altering them to the correct form. Since the man was a prisoner because of the fact that his Alzheimer’s made him dangerous to be around, many people took pity upon him so kurou was doing a good deed by training tsukyomi to help this man. He activated the mangekyou sharingan but then began suffering from using it so much in two days straight. So he and the prisoner returned to their homes for a few days to rest. After a couple of days of rest kurou felt rejuvenated and went to alter the mans memories.
He activated the mangekyou sharingan an then looked into the prisoners eyes and put him into tsukyomi he went through the mans memories shifting things back into order this took a considerable amount of chakra because he wasn’t doing this during the time it happened so it was putting a intense amount of strain upon kurou’s being eating away at his chakra quickly. After hours of burning away at chakra and replacing memories, the man awoke happy remembering all he had done and was incredibly sorry for what he had done to those around him. He thanked kurou and left to rebuild upon his life. Kurou passed out from strain of use of the mangekyou. He then took a 3 day leave and returned to finish the last parts of his training. Once he returned he was given his last four subjects, he took the first one to train the last part of tsukyomi. This prisoner was known for the slaughter of his whole family, this would be his punishment as apposed to being executed. If he learned the error of his ways then he would be set free, if he did not he would die. Kurou was his fate as of this point. He entered his mind and made him relive the experience of killing his family and their bodies rising from the grave tormenting him and killing him as he did to them multiple times. Once he was done he exited the genjutsu and the man was in tears yelling I’m sorry the guards dragged him to the court appeal where he would be decided if he learned his lesson or not. This technique only took a few seconds; he was speeding up in his use of tsukyomi. He then looked into the eyes of his last three subjects they were all with similar cases to the first three. Now all he had to do was do them all in a few seconds this would require a lot of chakra. And kurou would probably pass out from the strain. So he put them in the tsukyomi genjutsu and put them through the tortures necessary to cure them of their problems. Or he rearranged their memories and replaced them depending on who it was. When he was done it only took a few seconds he had done well. But passed out from over use of his mangekyou sharingan. Kurou awoke in the hospital and left for the chunin exams final stage. He was ready to fight his enemy for sure.





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PostSubject: Re: Kosetsu Uzumaki   Kosetsu Uzumaki Icon_minitimeThu Nov 03, 2011 12:34 am

Alright before I look over this anymore, you need to move all of the information out of the coded sections, (aka the [/b], and the [/color])

In terms of summons we have a summon forum: https://narutots.forumotion.com/f27-pending-submissions

The template for summons is located here: https://narutots.forumotion.com/t17-summon-template

Also space out your RPC sample.

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PostSubject: Re: Kosetsu Uzumaki   Kosetsu Uzumaki Icon_minitimeThu Nov 03, 2011 1:02 am

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PostSubject: Re: Kosetsu Uzumaki   Kosetsu Uzumaki Icon_minitimeThu Nov 03, 2011 1:13 am

https://narutots.forumotion.com/t5-jutsu-template Use this for your jutsu and please give a full description. Since it seems most of your jutsu are canon you can just copy paste them from the Naruto wiki and it should be fine.

Also in terms of your weapon please describe what it does, unless it is just a regular/canon weapon.

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PostSubject: Re: Kosetsu Uzumaki   Kosetsu Uzumaki Icon_minitimeFri Nov 04, 2011 1:24 am

Other then being really long and pretty durable, I'm not sure if it does anything yet Razz If it does then I'll add that to a creation post later. But for now it will just be a strong, longsword Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Kosetsu Uzumaki   Kosetsu Uzumaki Icon_minitimeFri Nov 04, 2011 1:25 am

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PostSubject: Re: Kosetsu Uzumaki   Kosetsu Uzumaki Icon_minitimeWed Nov 23, 2011 8:18 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kosetsu Uzumaki   Kosetsu Uzumaki Icon_minitimeMon Nov 28, 2011 6:51 pm

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Not sure why my staff aren't doing their jobs, this somewhat makes me displeased.

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